From a makeup artists perspective

So I have been watching Fashion Tv on youtube and came across this LANVIL backstage hair and makeup video. Critiquing is what I do; as fabulous as this video seems the eye makeup look seemed a bit sloppy. As I observed the video I noticed each artists different method in using a wet black flash drive color. Thank goodness for Q-tips to correct any messes, what do you think of the video?